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Spin (A Tribute To My Back!!!!)
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Spin (A Tribute To My Back!!!!) |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK 
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If I spin fast, go 'round and 'round I can fall back to hit the ground Floating softly, gently down To land upon my back. I stare up at an evening sky Squawking V-shapes flying high Stars start to twinkle as I lie Here upon my back. Violet dashed with soft pink haze Candy-floss clouds from summer days They still spin around as I gaze From down here on my back. I can forget what has been said Angry words all blazing red I should try to make things right instead But I prefer it on my back! Hmmmm..... did I mention that I really like my back?! In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This is... different...  ... heheI have to commend you on the original idea. Backs are awesome.  Without them, we'd all just be piles of junk on the floor, after all. Right? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
lol at least someone like's their back! Mine causes nothing but trouble  definately original!!I have a lizard, and his name is Jake. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
EleanorMoonbaby- Smiling here..  I enjoyed this bit of light-hearted penning. I'll be looking for more from you. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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