Teen Poetry #6 |
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Skyfire (challenge 2) |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding ![]() |
She leads on the world Knowing that no one will notice Yellow coloured mums Falling into the mud; In hopes that someone will Realise she does have Emotions and does love... certain people *~* Bleh... not my best, certainly, but it holds meaning for me, even if no one else gets it ![]() |
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Surreal Junior Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 35Paris |
Love that last line. Poems with good endings are always my favorites. Glory is a silent thing-- Mineral |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I get it...every word of it. ![]() You've put your heart into this and it shows. Love it, Rhonda. Hugs, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Hmm I really love this, it is extremely well written and I enjoyed reading every single word, thank you for sharing it with us ![]() Andrew |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I really liked this one, too... Heh...you rpic kinda looks like someone i went to school with... Much Luv, Tamma Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I also felt this was above par, Skyfire. You worked well within your restriction and still kept it creative and interesting. Very good answer to the challenge. ![]() Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
*decides this needs to be up with the rest of the challenge responses* ![]() "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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