Heart's Every Desire - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #6

Heart's Every Desire

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-11-03 08:14 PM

I wish I could give you what you want
Your heart's every desire
But unfortunately i can't
So instead, the things i give you
Are packed with meaning and love
In hope that it makes up for the things that i can't
And show tht i love you, and that i really do care

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-11-04 01:56 PM

I like this... lots of clarity in your emotions. An effective communicative piece.

Well done.

Parasite

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.