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Teen Poetry #6
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devinechild22
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0 posted 2002-11-04 04:27 PM


Writhing up into the sky
Black,grey,and dreary
You are giving me mixed signals
Drifting upwards from this pit of flames
You are giving me mixed signals
© Copyright 2002 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-04 04:45 PM

Hmm... interesting use of imagery... you imply that you are describing a person, and yet you describe them as something inhuman...

Very interesting piece... it made me uneven my eyebrows, that's for sure.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller
devinechild22
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2 posted 2002-11-04 05:48 PM

Parasite u crack me up!LOL.
           *Allison* But u r right.
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