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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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In your eyes i drown with a hatred, Non-existent life boils down to the Avulsion on my misery. hahahaha that was horrible how bout this one Inexplicable phenomenas of love Never ending with a smile, its the Amputation of my heart oohhhh these were horrible well i only have 3 letters to work with and thats my excuse Regina |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like the second one hun!  Just cause you only have three letters to work with, doesn't mean that your creative genius can't shine through  I certainly couldn't have done that with three letters; I had a hard time with 7 letters lol Challenge met! |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Try a senryu maybe? Ooh, that reminds me of an older challenge...  heheh...I like the first one best... but I think if you took a bit more time you could come up with something really awesome. Just pace yourself, Ina... take your time. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ina~ I have to say that I'm very impressed with what you came up with, and I give you a lot of credit for even attempting this with so little to work with. You did great! Thanks for participating in the challenge. I hope to see you involved in the next one too. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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