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Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-11-28 07:21 PM

Emotional?
Me?
I don't think so;
I don't feel.
I shut myself in
and that's the way
I like it.
(if I go grocery
shopping when I'm
hungry, I buy ice
cream)
Destructive?
Me?
Nay, I am not
destructive,
I am Destruction
personified.
(I bought a UCC
hoodie today --
it's red)
Procrastinating?
Me?
Damn straight,
baby,
Damn straight
(<>..<>)

lildevil
Junior Member

since 2002-11-21

Posts 47
missouri,usa

1 posted 2002-11-28 07:37 PM

i love this poem it so dresribes everything people see in me is that good or not
great write

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

2 posted 2002-11-28 09:35 PM

The title is awesome. That's all I have to say.

-Stinky Twinkie-

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

3 posted 2002-11-28 10:14 PM

Considering the conversation we had, and even are in the process of having, this isn't the half of it... LOL... Well done.

Kielo

I'm making my own country, and calling it Nothing. "We're our own country, and Nothing will save us now!"

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

4 posted 2002-11-28 10:22 PM

I like the title...so true uh?
Ri

o yea

good poem 2

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

5 posted 2002-11-29 01:47 AM

procrastination is my middle name.

your writing grows stronger everyday.

good write.

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now.

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-30-2002 08:44 PM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2002-11-30 12:18 PM

Rhonda~
Well, as I'm sure you know, I love this.
Jen is correct...your writing is definately growing
and improving with each write, and I'm happy to be
able to witness it.
This is a great little Rhondiforous vent, with those
inserted thoughts that I love so much.
Smiling at the ice cream line...me too.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2002-12-01 04:17 AM

my rhonda the procrastinator woohoo! lol...i want a red hoody too!!!
Robin

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

8 posted 2002-12-02 01:26 PM

i really like the use of parenthesis in this particular piece, i like the title as well. very nice job on this

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

9 posted 2002-12-02 10:14 PM

Nice job.
I've been diggin' your change in style.
Interesting way of writing about things.
And I agree with that title. Haha...so true.
"Destructive?
Me?
Nay, I am not
destructive,
I am Destruction
personified."

Great line.

Jenn

"I keep looking, looking for something more." Sara Evans

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

10 posted 2002-12-02 10:51 PM

Great poem! I also liked the way you used the "()" in your poem. Keep on writin'!

Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

11 posted 2002-12-03 12:03 PM

lol. Funny poem, whether you meant it to be or not, I like it.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

12 posted 2002-12-03 02:29 PM

Awesome!! Its so full of energy and you really show your proud of who you are

Thats great robin

i Loved it!

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

13 posted 2002-12-03 09:01 PM

I couldn't help but chuckle at the point of view. Nice way to look at life. I also am a proud procrastinator.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

14 posted 2002-12-04 09:50 AM

Interesting...

Andrew

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

15 posted 2002-12-04 11:31 AM

I absolutely love this to pieces... so true...
and Ice cream is the best thing ever... mmmm... I want some ice cream now...

"Wie ein Quadrat in einem Kreis, eck' ich immer wieder an obwohl ich doch schon lange weiß, daß ich niemals ändern kann." ~Wizo

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