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Teen Poetry #6

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Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

0 posted 2002-12-03 08:41 PM

I
always
have loved
the holidays
and the things
that come with.I
love the sights,the
smells,those sweet silver
bells.The lights,the weather,
if you've got friends,the more,the
better!It's a time for family,love and
hugging,
and with
that special
someone,some by
the fire snuggling.

[This message has been edited by Nan (12-03-2002 10:38 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-03 11:14 PM

Cool poem! I love that way you made that look like a tree, that was a neat idea.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-12-04 02:23 AM

*applauds* Well done

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
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WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

3 posted 2003-01-02 12:40 PM

I loved this. The way you formed it too like a tree is incredible. It showed me what you really feel about holiday season. I felt it too. Great job! ~*~Me~*~

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

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