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Open Poetry #23

-somwhere in the rain

Ixtab
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

0 posted 2002-10-30 02:42 AM

There, laying still
living, laughing every rain drop
spreading tears over my skin

wanting is returning

Ica xon ahiyacan ihuinti xochitli

Ixtab

cateash
New Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 6

1 posted 2002-10-30 04:37 AM

There was something about this that made me think, probably because it was so concise, it leaves alot to the reader...Like a haiku, but not one, it was quite beautiful and I liked it alot

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-30 02:18 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this is a unique style and I love the imagery in this! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-10-30 03:50 PM

I liked the poem's imagery.
But I cannot understand that last part.
What language is that?
Aztec?

Thanks for sharing.

God bless!

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