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regards2you
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0 posted 2002-10-15 02:11 AM

  Sometimes,
       I think
  I can't stand it
  another minute!
       This intense desire.
       This longing so much
       for your closeness.
  I must see
  and talk to you.
       I want to touch
       and be near you.
  Damn, this torture,

       ~waiting!~

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2002-10-15 02:33 AM

cute, it sucks one loved ones are away for long.

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2 posted 2002-10-15 03:18 AM

Very good, Pat. You got your point across very well and in very good form. thanks for sharing.

Love To All, Ethel

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3 posted 2002-10-15 07:53 PM

Pat, this is a cute piece...and a very
powerfully written piece of you.... Nicely
done...

regards2you
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4 posted 2002-10-16 08:31 AM

Majne and Ethel, thank you.

Magnus, that was a very interesting response, now, let me give you a
~piece~ of my mind!

Thank You

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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