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Open Poetry #23

I Am A Winner!!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-11-27 12:55 PM

Yep.
I am a winner.
The flashing sign told me so.
So did the lady on the telephone.
But the mirror tried to tell me
a different story.
It's a good thing
I rarely look
at those lying wall hangings.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2002-11-27 02:10 PM

Dark, deep and very powerful. Love it how this "little" poem speaks volumes.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2002-11-27 02:17 PM

I don't look at those lying wall hangings either.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2002-11-27 03:47 PM

i like this a lot! it made me smile, as i'm having a complete non mirror week, despite turning 20,and leaving my teenage years behind,i'm still on the recieving end of those evil little things called spots,or pimples as u say.
lots of love , gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

4 posted 2002-11-27 04:06 PM

I liked this poem a lot. Sometimes mirrors can be deceiving and try to bring you down, although so can ladies on a telephone!...lol
great poem.

-Joe-

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-11-27 04:22 PM

Damn talking mirrors! Cool poem Kacy.

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