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ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-12-08 01:39 PM

Is one immortal to recollect
'sleep' on an operation table?
human survival after biological death
a wishful fable

society observes the process
some are resusitated after one life cycle
others come powerfully close to clinical ends
'near to end' experiences are so much alike
about a final demise
life has its pillars.

Bodies seen..from above, at a distance
being in the near environment
for instance....
mortals would become accustomed to odd conditions...
accustomed to the 'new' nature
glimpses of past relatives appear.

A warm spirit approaches
mortals are prompted to evaluate the lives
playbacks of life rush by
yet they return to complete their cycle
the hereafter will wait another day.....

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-09-2002 12:22 AM).]

Ice_Queen
Junior Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 29
Delaware, USA

1 posted 2002-12-08 01:49 PM

I get the the sense, that you're a bit of a theologian, as am I.

This was a thinker for me, an intellectual peice, and little lacking in emotion, considering the subject matter. Did you mean for it to sound this...cerebral?

Groovy Oovy

"Love is a heartache waiting to happen,
And a promise never kept."

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-12-08 02:00 PM

Martin, my late husband had a "near death experience", years
before he actually passed away. He was the type person who
would have never said it happened, if it had not truly happened
that way. I totally believe what he said about it. Have you
had one, or know someone personally who did? Just wondering.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-12-09 12:26 PM

Ice Queen,

I hate the dryness here myself but the subject is what it is and I wanted a story.

Garysgirl,

just odd dreams..no such expereinces..thanks for asking..am sure there are so many who have

Computer
Junior Member

since 2002-12-08

Posts 10
Norfolk, NE

4 posted 2002-12-09 02:03 PM

I like it. Sometimes, with less emotion, the subject can be more clearly seen.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-12-09 11:58 PM

Thank you computer generally I do zero in on some very sticky topics with a minimum of flowery text, anyway...welcome to Piptalk

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