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Open Poetry #23

Traces

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-10-17 12:15 PM

rays reflect off clouds
another sunset shimmers
warm October night
on the grass beside the sea
a trace of you lingers still

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-10-17 02:37 AM

Cher,
I love traces! Thanks for that sweet little poem.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-10-17 11:57 AM

Cher, I like this. It brings back memories. It is pleasant read.
Thank You
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-10-17 12:02 PM

Cheryl, this is beautifully said....and in such few words, too. I wish I could get across what I mean in such few words. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-03 04:34 AM

beautiful!

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