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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-10 09:54 PM

something made me look up,
this ordinary day
of winter grey
and motionless skies,
hynotic in its emptiness,
this fog now lifted
by your sudden caress,
when i felt you enter
as the bird fluttered by,
shattering the cold
and the loneliness
and i wonder
if you felt me too,
felt my love,
entering you?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2002-12-10 09:56 PM

Beautiful and deeply spiritual. (if I understood it correctly) Thanks Inked
raph

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-12-10 11:06 PM

such feelings are to be remembered...and rare indeed

enjoyed the read..

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-10 11:20 PM

Very beautiful poem, filled with feelings and emotions. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-11 02:29 AM

beautiful!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-12-11 04:25 AM

Nice writing...James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2002-12-11 06:55 AM

thank s for the nice thoughts,

aenimal.........yes, spiritual, but not in a religious sense

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

7 posted 2002-12-11 05:29 PM

Sooooo nice, to feel another even when they aren't there, you describe it beautifully--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

8 posted 2002-12-11 05:35 PM

Simply lovely.

Sunkissed.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-12-11 09:19 PM

inkedgoddess - your writings are touching, filled with softness, caressing, and words from within...

BC

cmslaton
New Member

since 2002-12-11

Posts 4
Georgia, USA

10 posted 2002-12-12 12:04 PM

Beautiful poem.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2002-12-12 12:29 PM

What a romantic thought, and warming too.

Season's Greetings
from my home in Canada to yours!

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