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Open Poetry #23

I Dunno

quik
Member

since 2002-11-27

Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

0 posted 2002-12-11 09:55 PM

Open gates to freedom of life
Deceased bodies everywhere
I feel stranded on a deserted island
No sign of intelligent life form
everything silent like we do the moment of silence
Everything gets smaller and smaller
My eyes start to fold inside out
I feel my insides rippin through like i broke my bones
Hair feels like its being ripped out by some pliers
I feel scared and insecure
the light gets brighter and dims
i'm out like a light bulb

fishop
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

1 posted 2002-12-12 12:12 PM

I had a moment of silence. strange piece. Not sure what to make of it but the pliers thing hurt.

Thanks for sharing

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-12 02:08 AM

ouch!

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