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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Dark laced words from inside, where fear does hide, I keep, Quiet, in my core, and I can't bring myself to prostitute these secrets, even for you. WhiteRose "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wow Rose, this is deep. I'm keepin it, I enjoyed it. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Written with honesty .... and courage. Well "thought". Bob |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, this has a lot of thought in it. I may talk a lot and write a lot about my life, but I also have some "secrets" that I don't talk about either. Doesn't everybody?!? Hummm!!!! I wonder??? Thanks for sharing this, sweet "Rose". Love To All, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-17-2002 04:55 PM).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I DO like this one a LOT!  Write on!The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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storyteller.of.poets Junior Member
since 2002-10-16
Posts 11 |
good poem, i liked it cuz it left some to the imangination... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Donna for your nice response.  Bob, so nice of you to say. I am in actuality, a coward.  Ethel, we all have those little secrets. The ones that are best kept that way. Thanks for reading and responding. Aguste, thanks so much. Glad you liked it lots. Storyteller, I'm so glad you enjoyed what I didn't say. Thank you for reading and responding. |
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