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Poetic Freestyle-Describe Her (Our Love)
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Poetic Freestyle-Describe Her (Our Love) |
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Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
Describe Her: She smells like flowers on a spring afternoon Like a rose from the concrete I'm waiting on our love to bloom She was everything I could ask for and more I really never had girl tell me she loved me before Siting here in amazement at her classy style I like to get inside her mind as we talk for a while When I'm tired I look to her for power While I'm in the bathroom I stare at her heavenly curves while she's in the shower Saying to myself she's all mine What have I done to deserve beauty of this kind She's sophisticated but simple at the same time Always on my mind that's why I had to freestyle this rhyme It's like I know when she around as if I had a spidey sense Rubbing her soft shoulders when she becomes tense The only word to describe her is lovely And I'm glad that she's loving me With all her heart I should've known this was love from the start Because like old paintings Our love gets more valuable over time like a work of art |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Street Poet Sounds like love to me. Well done! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
ooh! DEFINITELY sounds like love! I like the way you compared this love to art. Nice!!! Kris Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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