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Open Poetry #23

Sticks and stones

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-21 02:33 PM

Her face is transposed light without scent.
Submerged charms. Rivers dry.
Snowflakes melting to a street grate.
Signs invisible. Road rain.
Key-cracked tumbler of a new lock.
Thousand pages. Stone gray book.
Deep dream's wait to be unweighed.
No rhyme's end. No closure's seat.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-10-21 04:33 PM

As always, superb. Love the short expressions of thought, they flow like water down hill. Nicely done Mike.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-10-21 04:45 PM

"Deep dreams wait to be unweighed"
I love this, Mr.Squirrel....

~ furry rodent hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-10-21 05:12 PM

Thank you both. And Lyra, miss ya!

Here's a sorta key to this poem, via subject verb conjunction verb.

love sticks and stones

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

4 posted 2002-10-21 05:25 PM

Great work....enjoyed very much.

H.

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