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The Times Of Love |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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then he smiled the perseverance of a kiss befriended his imagination near or apart, he loves her the silence in their hearts delivered a sense of turmoil -yes, the magnitude of love forsakes itself certain sad moments, sings the carpet while, he, he turns and smiles at love; he knows, will conquer **** **** **** ..circa 1986..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris ..poem archived in several other sites ..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
!!!!! Ok, Spiros? This rocks...I mean - floored here...  K |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
right. Not sure how this managed only one reply. I'm bumping it for you... K |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
like most everything about this except the punctuation. If you can't lose it all, maybe just the comma between while and he would appease me...heh Cheers,  JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Severn../\.. + Jamie../\..thanks a lot for reading and commenting; appreciate it.. ..Severn..wild, thanks.. ..Jamie..the way i read it, that comma belongs there..perhaps there is some clinical reason why it shouldn't be there and you may bring it to my attention; thanks.. ../\..Spiros -----------1966 was a good year------ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Spiros, this was beautifully written. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..garysgirl../\..thanks for reading and thanks for the kind words../\..Spiros -------------calm seas--------- |
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