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Rocko
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since 2014-03-10
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0 posted 2014-04-13 06:08 AM

Messengers of God

by

Radrook
Between dimensions

Angels flitter like shooting

Stars to realms unknown
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2014-05-01 04:02 PM

Beautiful thought and lovely imagery!

Margherita
jjbreunig3
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since 2009-07-29
Posts 423
Maine, USA
2 posted 2014-05-08 12:25 PM

A delightful senryu; perhaps a bit of punctuation could enhance it, such as:

Between dimensions,
Angels flitter like shooting...
Stars to realms unknown!

-Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
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