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PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

0 posted 2003-01-06 05:04 PM

Your touch so divine
A feeling so fine
A love so swell
then akiss farewell
But now we're alone
Only voices on a phone
Your heart is away
Breaking by the day
Needing to feel you
Nothing I can do
The sea divides me
So we cannot be
My lesson is learned
My broken heart was earned
Now I look back to know
What God didn't show
Distance can break
What He cannot take

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-01-06 07:11 PM

Serena,

Oh, so sad....hope this can somehow work out for you....miracles happen every day...assuming this is about yourself...

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

2 posted 2003-01-06 07:20 PM

nice poem

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-01-06 08:32 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) It can break, I just felt this heartbreak New Years Day! (wipes tears) I wish you the best of happiness and hope this romance is true but I also urge you to be careful so you don't break your heart like mine did and listen to how your love feels, sweet friend, I wish you the best, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Serena, thank you for sharing!

May love and liht always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-06 08:48 PM

Serena, I feel the hurt in this poem because I know how it feels to be away from your true love. My Love and I have a long-distance relationship right now. I miss him so much right now that my heart aches....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

5 posted 2003-01-06 08:51 PM

Thanx for the kind words! Well, as far as i know its true, so I guess I have to wait and see what happens! Heartbreak is the worst feeling in the world, but lifes goes on right? Thank you again!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-01-06 10:49 PM

distance sucks,
i will only fall in love next time within 50 miles of the jerseyshore, i promise

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