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Open Poetry #24
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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
0 posted 2003-01-15 04:14 PM

Raindrops fall
upon your leaves
the sky is dark
you've lost your mark
kids are playing in the park
people leave
before you can call
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-01-15 09:49 PM


Kellie, the image of a lost
person trying to gather
attention by one
passer-by
is so evident in this...

thank you!
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-01-15 10:15 PM

Great piece Kellie
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