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Open Poetry #24

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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2003-01-20 12:14 PM

It was inside
I felt it reach out
It touched I couldnt see
It was within without

I held it tight
I believe in it
it is truly what it is not
I taste, I touch, I smell

Perhaps tomorrow i'll be in it
within perhaps without
we will be/Are the same
But we will not until tomorrow.

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-01-20 06:15 PM

"It was inside
I felt it reach out
It touched I couldnt see
It was within without"

not sure exactly what you mean, but I'm thinking it's love

I liked this part here, best

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-01-20 07:24 PM

(sigh) I too thought the same thing as Susan reading this, sounds like the heart of a lover, and I know with your deserving heart you will fall in it in no tie, as I was there but now am way out of it! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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