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Open Poetry #24

Shower Of Color..Senryu

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-01-30 02:13 PM

Reflection of gems
cascade upon violet
emerald shower.

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (01-30-2003 06:36 PM).]

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

1 posted 2003-01-30 02:22 PM

It is hard to say a lot with a few words.You must choice most carefully.Beautiful picture for a beautiful poem.

paladin

....a knight without armor

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-02-01 12:11 PM

this is beautiful!!

I love it

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Dr Pepper Freak
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since 2003-01-30

Posts 72
CA

3 posted 2003-02-01 02:18 PM

So much said without saying much. Beautiful job, anda lovely picture too!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

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