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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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needing my hate forsaken findings frail encounters left me blinded romance has sold out distracted by shame and misery what a waste fly away far on fading wings take the sun and give it to you while im there i shall steal the moon what else havent i done nothing can be perfect ive done everything seen wonderful things felt lonely rain frozen in the winds of pain time refuses desire secluded old love deserves a second chance oh yea i forgot we can never have that |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad...  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Yes sad...but powerful and deeply touching. We heal through our words...and our wounds. Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"felt lonely rain frozen in the winds of pain time refuses desire secluded" I loved these lines! Very nice. Susan C. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) oh Talia, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I know these tears ever so well and I know somehow some love will find your way soon! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Talia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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