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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Disrupted fragile broken in acts of trust scattered in salt glue to mend you broke my heart but you did not break me "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
As usual, another poem I love by one smart lady.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Wow... beautiful and strong. Let nothing break you... your soul always strong. I love it. Thank you!! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"salt glue"...is it that the healing can be as painful as being wounded, or does it recall the metaphor "like salt in a wound"? Maybe neither. Regardless, it's powerful! |
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seven_conscious Junior Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 33 |
i really liked the way you wrote this i interpreted it as being broken up this way... fragile / broken in acts of trust /scattered in salt / glue to mend / you broke my heart/ but you did not break me don't know if that's how you intended it to be, but any way you slice it (pun intended) i liked it! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....this is a powerful (and beautiful)affirmational poem. Eric |
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