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Open Poetry #24

Abandoned

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-02-10 01:31 AM

How brittle a fate my passion owes
to thoughts of you, my love
this heart, abandoned from your touch
emptied
lonely
cooing dove

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-02-10 01:42 AM

short and powerful...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-02-11 09:50 PM

This is absolutely beautiful...
very very special Robert.
Loved this one....sure did !

~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2003-02-12 01:45 AM

Robert,
this was tight and powerful. well done. I especially liked the first line

how brittle a fate my passion owes

wow!

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

4 posted 2003-02-12 05:19 AM

Impressive.

Sunkissed.

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