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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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Ever shifting sand Sensual like a woman Moving in her sleep |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
paladin - woman sleeping soft dreaming of sandcastles high till the tide returns - Chris  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Beautiful one Robert! This one I really love... a keeper for my library. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
gives a great visual with little amount of words... great poem "Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I too have those dreams and I always wonder if my dream girl in my dreams thinks of me when she turns, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ebb and flow of tide Dunes to shoals of shifting sands Shores revivified |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Robert..What a beautifully sensual image you've created with this senyru.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is especially fabulous. I love it; it is perfect! Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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