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I was Thinking
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I was Thinking |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Another old one. I was Thinking.. I was thinking, maybe I need a new plan I was thinking, maybe I need not be your biggest fan I spoiled you and made you feel I would always come when you call In return, you did what you wanted for yourself Making me feel used and so small I was thinking, maybe I need to take a stand I was thinking, maybe I don't need a man I gave up everything that made up me I gave you far too much power, and could no longer be I was thinking, maybe I need to get back to who I really am I was thinking, I am going to run to get away from this painful sham |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this a lot Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sounds like serious thoughts.. nicely done Susan... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I was thinking that too |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Sometimes we need to stop and think about things that are troubling us instead of just accepting them. Another well done write [This message has been edited by Brad Majors (02-13-2003 01:59 PM).] |
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