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The Night
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The Night |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
The night, my darkest friend Inside your silent moments, I see your stars When the morning returns you leave for another I spend each day recollecting my memories Avoiding the thought of the pain you bring to me Shall I find a place where day is forever I would be as pleased as many other Shall I stop finding dreams, for they are never real I call for a moment when screams will desert my call Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Read this through a few times; Deep, and I like it.... I wish the word call wasn't used twice in last line.... it makes me re-think the meaning.... I liked the night going to another... Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Daniel, this is a strong poem. I feel lots of emotion in it. It's written very well. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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