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Falling Apart
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Falling Apart |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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My eyes tainted- So much poverty I see, My lips cracking- The injustice I leak, My mind is blemished, From desires, not quenched, My heart broken, From the people I left, My hands quivering, For not helping a man, My legs collapsing, For I have lost faith, My soul burning, To the devil’s taste. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Xeonox, I enjoyed your poem... Many of the thoughts I share as well... Great Job Richy |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So sad.... But, written well!!! I liked it!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So much to let go of, the sadness that comes with regrets most of all. Nice expression, never the less. |
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