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Open Poetry #26

A Honeybee’s Challenge

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-05-04 11:06 AM

You buzzed me right into this one, Melissa. THANKS.

Silly Ode to my Body:

Oh, some days you make me angry
and some days you make me proud.
Some days you push me to a silent cry
while on others you force me into loud.

But every day I know you try
to give me what I want.
The problem is I’m never sure
if what I want is pain or cure.

So I just keep moving
Forward…
it’s the only direction I know.
But as to the speed we want to go?
That’s always decided by you.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

1 posted 2003-05-04 11:10 AM

A great write, Kacy!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-05-04 11:12 AM

Mon Cherie, THANKS!
This is partly the result of a migraine.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2003-05-04 11:53 AM

Yep, this is definately a woman's kind of ode to her body

A great write, especially the last two lines and thanks for taking the challenge! *sighs* next life, I'm a man, life would be so much easier hehe

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-05-04 11:56 AM

Oh no, Melissa! You are a wonderful representative of WOMAN.
This was an enjoyable challenge.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2003-05-04 11:58 AM

A challenge perfectly met....I LOVE IT!!!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-05-04 12:00 PM

THANKS, lady Startime!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-05-04 12:43 PM

great writing as always Kacy

Zaynab
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since 2003-05-04

Posts 59
Kuwait

8 posted 2003-05-04 12:45 PM

nice one!

Kill me tonight and I will love again
Leave me to live and I live in pain
Leave me no love and I live in vain
Kill me tonight and kill the pain

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-05-04 03:29 PM

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed.

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