Yesterday's Model - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #26

Yesterday's Model

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-05-07 07:30 PM

Yesterday's Model

Making my heart ache she applied the
brakes after easing back on the throttle.

The process now complete of choosing me and
using me until I became yesterday's model.

And me in desperation hold onto spent kisses
and remnants of happiness and caring.

Hoping that the memory of tender moments
we shared will sustain me until I can recover
and fit myself into the arms of a new lover.

JamesLee
May07
2003

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2003-05-07 07:33 PM

Sad but at the same time filled with hope for a new love who will heal the pain of the old one....I felt this poem...thank you...

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2003-05-07 08:12 PM

Again, as always, I liked

Tara

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-05-07 08:13 PM

James:

bittersweet my friend
xxoo

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-05-07 08:20 PM

All things end, but even in uncerstanding this it is painful to feel disposable.

Thank you for sharing this

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-05-08 06:33 AM

Thank you Startime, rosepetal, littlewing and icebox for the nice responses.
Sometimes we don't realize someone's agenda until it slaps us in the face...James

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.