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Open Poetry #26

Gravitation

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

0 posted 2003-05-14 10:54 PM

Gravitation
into the mouth of silence
wishful wings
merge from shadows
waving into vessels of mystery
cliffy thoughts
posses the spirit
to jump into a spiral void.

A ghostly shape of my own
is burning into my throat
and through my eyes
the glittery flame
of my longing
flows unafraid...

Gravitating,
Etain.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-05-16 06:10 PM

Etain what power in this poem!

and through my eyes
the glittery flame
of my longing
flows unafraid...

This is incredibly beautiful!
Put it in my library.
Love, Margherita

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-05-16 06:38 PM

How could I miss these words...and not recognize the beauty?
Love,
Eric

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-05-16 06:44 PM

wow...wonderful writing. One of those I wish I had written

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

4 posted 2003-05-16 07:59 PM

You honor me with your presence.
Thanks for this visit poets
and for reading,
my words are yours.
Placing a smile
for you.

Grateful,
Etain.

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