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Open Poetry #26
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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-05-15 08:29 PM


Fading

I try to hold back
The shrinking walls of my space
But they fade to black
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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-15 08:33 PM

short and very good

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jwesley
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2 posted 2003-05-15 08:36 PM

Very good.

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3 posted 2003-05-15 09:19 PM

~smiling~
I know the feeling

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