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Open Poetry #26
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Yitzy
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since 2003-05-12
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0 posted 2003-05-19 10:14 AM

Hope

If you soak my soul in sorrow
Drain my heart of delight
Will I look to tomorrow?
Preserve my will to fight

Any price will be worth paying
Just let my will reamain
So that I may keep on praying
Pray for a better day
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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
1 posted 2003-05-19 10:22 AM

First I'd like to say it's a nice poem and second you spelled remain wrong.  just so you know.

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.
Yitzy
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since 2003-05-12
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2 posted 2003-05-19 10:24 AM

typo and thank you
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