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Open Poetry #26
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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87
0 posted 2003-05-22 04:34 PM

my heart is breaking
a million needles
piercing me
my heart of glass
shatters at my feet
i love you
i guess i always will
my second love
ends like my first
nothing ever comes of nothing
but i loved you
like i loved him
but my heart is breaking
as i give up hope
i turn my back
and walk away

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found
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Fred Hobbs
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US
1 posted 2003-05-22 04:39 PM

I really liked your poem.  Having been around a while I have learned that the first and second (and sometimes the twentieth) loves are seldom indicators of anything.

fh
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-05-23 05:09 AM

yeah...I know what ya mean
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