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Open Poetry #26
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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-06-07 11:33 AM

dawn
      sees a
              spotted fawn running
salmon swimming up
                            stream at
                                        dawn

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-06-07 11:34 AM

I do like your version of Dawn.
And it is a 'Twenty or less'!!  Good one too!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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Gaia
2 posted 2003-06-07 11:51 AM

very nice! another way to greet the dawn
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-01-17 01:45 PM

Terrific!!!!
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