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Open Poetry #26
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0 posted 2003-06-10 05:06 PM

I'm glaring at myself in the bathroom mirror..
I'm talking to myself in a way that sounds
like I'm talking to you. Heh..
you know, it didn't work out quite the way I'd planned.
I want to smirk at my own reflection,
but I'm stuck in a perpetual dream.
The guitar rifts still play in my mind,
I know all the lyrics,
almost like it's something I'd write.
© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-10 06:17 PM

nicely written,, and enjoyed...

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2 posted 2003-06-11 03:39 AM

cool write
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