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Open Poetry #26

Execution

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-06-12 12:41 PM

Sword thrust
through the heart
of shadow

Dominion ended
I will not mourn
the death of you

Submerged
in the warmth of
your blood spilled

I will lay fetal
I will be reborn

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2003-06-12 12:48 PM

Simple and to the point (no pun intended).

I like it!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-06-12 01:26 AM

Raph!!!!

You speaking of yourself here?

brilliant brilliant amazing write
you . . .

If I am off - oops - but mannnn
this is (in awe)
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-06-12 06:57 AM

yes, to whom do you speak, i wonder,.....whoever tho, beyond the darkness, it is enpowering......

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-12 12:33 PM

dang! that's powerful!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-06-12 09:18 PM

thank you kindly icebox

Sue that's the intended target yes

inked empowering yes only if this feeling lasts

thanks dix

JenniX
Junior Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 29

6 posted 2003-06-13 12:26 PM

powerfull poem.
To whom might this be about,
out thru the darknes is thou soul
great poem
continie the great work
JenniX

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-06-13 04:03 PM

Thanks JX appreciate it

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