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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2003-05-01 12:01 PM

This is simple in comparison to my other haikus/tankas/senryus...but sometimes true love is that simple....

Soulmate Senryu

We are dreams awake
You are my mirror
And I am your reflection

By Melissa Long-Monette

[This message has been edited by Honeybee (05-01-2003 12:42 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-05-01 12:15 PM

Melissa ~

I believe I know what you are saying...and you expressed it very well.

Very special little write!

Warm hugs,
Linda

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-05-01 12:26 PM

.....

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-05-01 12:32 PM

(smiles) Oh Melissa, all your wonderful senryus are beautiful, sweet friend, I'm happy to see you posting them again! (kiss on cheek) I think the sunflower one was probably my favorite ever if I can remember correctly, you always make me smile with your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-05-01 01:42 PM

beautiful!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-05-01 01:50 PM

Melissa, from your replies and your comment,
it looks like you've done this a lot like I
do the rictameters. I love these short verses.
The rictameters are just easier for me tdo
so they will say more. You had no trouble
saaying what you wanted to. This is beautiful.

Hugs,
Ethel

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2003-05-01 02:10 PM

Very nice. I enjoyed this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-05-01 02:20 PM

A perfect image presented!

Enjoyed this greatly.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-05-01 02:52 PM

Honeybee
Very good you nailed it.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-05-01 03:11 PM

Precisely!
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

10 posted 2003-05-02 12:34 PM

Superbly done. Yes, true love is that simple, even when it seems too difficult.

Thank you.

Peace is the only battle worth waging.
--- Albert Camus

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-05-02 06:31 PM

Melissa:

you penned in perfectly
amazing writer you are
this is beautiful . . .
xxoo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2003-05-02 07:20 PM

Beautiful Melissa....much enjoyed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

13 posted 2003-05-02 07:26 PM

Said with perfect beauty....Well done...

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2003-05-02 07:41 PM

A simple masterpiece.
Accolades. TD

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