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Open Poetry #27
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Sunkissed
Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610
0 posted 2003-07-07 10:27 PM

I did want to say something,

Anything

But the words
Lay entombed inside
where I, the gatekeeper

Mourn...

Sunkissed.
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-07-07 10:30 PM

A powerful little write.
You certainly are..."sunkissed".
Enjoyed. TD
Sunkissed
Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610
2 posted 2003-07-07 10:53 PM

Thanks, TD

Your comment is always appreciated.

Sunkissed.
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2003-07-08 12:11 PM

it's sad when the words are locked away but it looks like you have the key.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178
4 posted 2003-07-08 09:36 AM

And still the words came...beautifuly.
Eric
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