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Open Poetry #27

Ask My Heart

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-07-13 02:18 PM

mesmerized with infatuations
and shadows of you on my
mind
~
a serenade of love trickles in my
heart with
fragrances of you lingering in my
thoughts
~
expressions reflecting from my
face come from the mirror of my
heart
~
that you have decorated with your
imagery of love
~
eyes beholders see your love but
only as i feel it within
~
are the reflections a mirage ~ ~
~
ask my heart

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-13 02:19 PM

Wonderful write!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-13 02:22 PM

Glenn, this is a really pretty love poem.
My favorite verse is this one....

a serenade of love trickles in my
heart with
fragrances of you lingering in my
thoughts

Just beautiful thoughts.

Hugs

Ethel

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-07-13 06:21 PM

Great write!

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

4 posted 2003-07-13 10:14 PM

I love that thinking mind of yours QjQ!

I really enjoyed this!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-07-14 06:52 AM

dont ask you heart; you already know

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-07-14 08:03 AM

enjoy your poems...and thank you for your comments on mine as well...Have a good day

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