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The Fire |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Thoughts interlope with string sewn onto my shoulder as my heart. Clouds form like indian clay, place me below a severed phone cord kind of day. Wish breath tangible, touch. A simple window cools down my whole body. Summer evening the sun sets as my mind puts out the fire. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
excellent! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
your ardor for the craft is rousing Karou -- keep it up |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
creative write very descriptive |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Wish breath tangible, touch. A simple window cools down my whole body. Summer evening the sun sets as my mind puts out the fire. You are on fire gal...keep these coming! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thoughts interlope with string sewn onto my shoulder as my heart. Meghan, I like very much!!! Very HOTT!!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thoughts interlope with string sewn onto my shoulder as my heart. Meghan, I like very much!!! Very HOTT!!! LOL Hugs Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
a severed phone cord kind of day. loved that |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poetry is as interesting and unique as your wonderful photo!  Luvs'n hugs, EA |
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