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Warm Heart In January.
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Warm Heart In January. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Seeing you by chance, hurrying through the cold January rain,warmed my heart. Cold for so long,nothing to break it's steel cage,till you came along,now only you can i think of. How i wish you were younger and had not gold on your finger,what soul mates we would be. My day is more real when i see you, but you are off limits to me,as a seagull on an angry sea. Your look of love,forbidden love,disarms me. Do i realy see love in your eyes? Or does my heart trick me? Trying not to think of you, does not work and i miss you more than i did at the start. Would you love me? In the end probably not, is my life destined to be solitary? |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
enjoyed the read my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Oh yeah, there's trouble ahead in this poem. Nice compilation of a turning point, after which a person thinks, "I thought I had problems before." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's so sad  |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
AWESOME |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Phil: this is utterly bitersweet, my friend I do know this tune . . . sadly beautiful writing xxoo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very Sad ARCTIC WIND |
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