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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I like to chew on my words before I spit them out at you. Let you digest my ideals before you can contest them. Complex acidic conquest, I hope I've made myself clear. My thoughts bounce off the pavement, back into my ear. And I think it quite cruel to focus on the wind when I'm standing right here. Speaking to you the hidden veiw in which I see the world. Like if my feet could balance, one would think, I could just let go. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
good write - I especially liked this part ----------------------------------------- And I think it quite cruel to focus on the wind when I'm standing right here. ----------------------------------------- write on I'll be watching for more Mike . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (07-19-2003 01:42 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hey Meg. thats good. I liked the scheme of this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
And I think it quite cruel to focus on the wind when I'm standing right here... A major part of why I bowed out of the human race. You're reading my mind again..but not the good parts those are packaged in the simple brown paper bag..uh nevermind. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Hooray! I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very interesting. Enjoyed very much. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
agreed! an interesting write  Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
they all stole my favourite verse. youre going into my library again lady. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Meghan: heh I like to chew on my words before I spit them out at you. I just usually spit without chewing I know bad habits die hard This is brilliant xxoo |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Meghan- Good Job We see the light of those |
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