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Open Poetry #27

unraveled (20 or less)

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2003-07-24 04:35 AM

I pray
for a tie that binds
knowing I will not survive
if dreams unravel.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-07-24 04:42 AM

your dreams are safe

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-07-24 05:18 AM

Nicely done, Edder...I'm liking this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-24 05:43 AM

funny thing about dreams...

if you ever really have to, you can always make more

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

4 posted 2003-07-24 08:10 AM

I don't think you have to worry about your dreams, my friend, as long as you share them! Enjoyed your thoughts here! ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-07-24 08:23 AM

Very nice piece...I know of your fears. Edder, you will survive, carrying another dream.

Enjoyed this!

Patricia

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