I am (challenge) - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

0 posted 2003-07-26 12:46 PM

I Am...
a basically basic poem

I am strong when I must
Soft in comfort of trust

I am
undefined
unrefined...

Unique of kind

I am
unmolded clay
to sculpt in my own way

I am
free to explore
or close a chapter’s door

Fickle forevermore

And although I am now one mixed up me
I’m on journey to become who I need to be

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2003-07-26 12:51 PM

Nice response to the challenge, Patricia!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-07-26 01:02 PM

FANTASTIC!!

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-07-26 01:21 PM

Very, very nice Patricia! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-07-26 01:44 PM

enjoyed this, very much

M

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-07-26 02:27 PM

Patricia!
beautiful!

I’m on journey to become who I need to be

when you get there - give me directions k?
xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-07-26 02:31 PM

And although I am now one mixed up me
I’m on journey to become who I need to be

yeah, me too, Patricia.

This is a challenge well met.
Hugs

Ethel

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-07-26 03:14 PM

Lovely!
Eric

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-07-26 03:18 PM

We are all works in progress, Dear Patricia. It was nice to get to know you better!

Linda

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2003-07-26 05:28 PM

I’m on journey to become who I need to be

And I have no doubt that you will get there.

absolutely wonderful Patricia.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

10 posted 2003-07-26 05:31 PM

I loved this one.I'm going to keep it.You met this challenge well.

angelblueyes

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-07-26 06:28 PM

Seems like we've just received a present from the birthday girl! I'm so glad you found Passions!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-26-2003 06:29 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2003-07-26 09:53 PM

Patricia - and who you need to be you will be...

BC

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

13 posted 2003-07-26 10:19 PM

YES.

Me too, dear lady, me too.

Loved your unique spin on this.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.