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Open Poetry #27
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kaile
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0 posted 2003-07-30 02:47 AM

scorching rays beat hard
tiger forced to look straight when
tourists snap photos
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Velociraptor1
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1 posted 2003-07-30 03:27 AM

i really like your poem i reckon it's great.
A tiger is my favourite cat.
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-07-30 04:30 AM

Poor thing,
it should be free.

Great write.
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