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Open Poetry #27

Words of Poet

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-21 12:21 PM

Ah,
sweet words of poet.
Concealing blunt emotion
sealed tightly between metaphor.
I squeeze myself inside
of a lie and a

convulsing
beauty seeping
like a bird hyptnotizing
me as
I'm
sleeping.

Sew a delicate thread of my life
it's breathing
about me..i wonder,
if this mind is compiled of
nothing but cobwebs
and dry leaves.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

1 posted 2003-06-21 12:28 PM

hmmm another deeply moving poem and you express everything so beautifully...lol yea i kinda went "ack he is in my writings! damn it..." lol but thanks for the compliment none the less

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-21 04:16 AM

love the ending of this

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-06-21 07:31 AM

So many words...
so little time...

Meghan, a wonderful read. Thank you!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-06-21 08:12 AM

captivating thoughts in a very brilliant write....lovely read thankyou

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-06-21 10:35 AM

intricate in design ,,,,,very well written

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-06-21 10:43 AM

Cobwebs and dry leaves have so much beautiful things to tell!
You write beautifully!
Love, Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-07-30 04:45 PM

I enjoyed reading your thoughts about the subject.

Very interesting, Liked it a lot

ARCTIC WIND

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