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Open Poetry #27

Light my fire

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

0 posted 2003-06-21 03:52 PM

Oh join me my friend
enable me to visage
as I hold you in conditional love
ready to curse you
if you fail me

Your presence assures me
as I constantly check for you

I am amazed at your stamina
come
Light my need

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . .

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-06-21 04:10 PM

I loved the sense of longing in this.
Nice one dreambuilder~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-06-22 12:29 PM

Ok reaching for my smokes . . . .
LMAO
awesome write
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-23-2003 08:39 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-22 04:57 AM

strong write...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-06-23 08:38 PM

. . . this needs to breathe . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-24 05:16 AM

inhale...exhale...

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

6 posted 2003-06-26 02:02 AM

"as I hold you in conditional love
ready to curse you
if you fail me" If ever the truth were spoken....this is it!

I loved it

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2009-03-30 07:26 PM

Ouu, i enjoyed this! ~ I like the darkness in it, also the romantic vibe

ARCTIC WIND

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